Monday, 30 May 2016

Persuasive writing

Room 7
Halsey drive 106

Dear Mrs Davies crook,

My name is William Lee. School is boring because I'm bad at everything. I want school to be all about math because every kid can be smart than usual. Did you know that people can answer really quickly.

People can be friendly because the take turns on the Chromebooks also one person can do it for 20 minutes and the other person can do the rest.

People can help other people because they can struggle.

Strategies can help by answering the question quicker.

Also you can think so you can be smart.

Thank you for reading my letter. I hope you change what I said.

Your sincerely

1 comment:

  1. Well done William. I don't agree that you're bad at everything though, you are excellent at Maths! Next time, make sure you check your work for capital letters on names.